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You're my falling star in the wake of morning
I watch as you disappear behind a crimson curtain

My life, or what is left of it is simply a meer stage
Weeping roses left lying upon the floor, fading and grey
No one to pick them up, they just wither away
Like a story with no ending; an empty page
Left to write in about a marionette whose mask can't cover the hurtting
But if left crestfallen' lying on the stage floor mourning

"Encore! Encore!" a restless crowd cries
Rows of empty seats... save one
"I thought you left, the play is finished"
You place your hand on my cheek, I touch your hand in fear you might diminish
You smile softly, "Life goes on, don't say you are done."
A white rose in his hand, he wipes the tears away from my eyes.

"Encore, my lovely marionette," he whispered "Good show"
"There's more to this play,
Then even the writer will ever know"
©2005-2009 ~DailyDeath
:icondailydeath:

Author's Comments

As requested. A new art. This is an old but favourite piece of mine.

I'd like to thank you if you take the time to comment.
:hug:

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:icon1poetswords:
beautiful. i love that last part.

and you are a very lovely lady

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"When one boasts of himself, he shows people where he stands. When one boasts of another, he shows people where he's going."
:icondailydeath:
aww thanks. I dont know if the photo works well or not with the poem.

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Spare me just, three last words
I love you is all she heard
and I'll wait for you.. but I can't wait forever..
:iconromanceaddict:
that picture........jess...........*is at a loss for words*

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Chomp On This
:pacman:
Log On, Load Up, Blow Minds

i do photography too, check my scraps!!
:icondailydeath:
:blushes:

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Spare me just, three last words
I love you is all she heard
and I'll wait for you.. but I can't wait forever..
:iconromanceaddict:
:faint:
just..............just...........wow..........and to such a good piece of literature.......oh jess

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Chomp On This
:pacman:
Log On, Load Up, Blow Minds

i do photography too, check my scraps!!
:iconlaurabeth:
I like how you got into the poem. With a simple start and an outstanding ending :D

Since I contain no distinct writing talents, I cannot critic on your work :bow:

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Laura Beth is So Over Rated.
My new name is Claud
:iconels99000:
wow, beautiful picture Jessica... and man it's been a long time since I've seen that poem... since your exodus account if I recall right. It may be old, but it's still a wonderful piece of work. It's good to see your writings again Jess, it really is :hug: And may God bless your talents

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:bulletblue: You can learn a lot from a simple piece of paper
:iconslenderblade:
um...

hmm.

i'm impressed -_-

it is not often my mood changes directly because of a poem. and to say that, and honestly say i did get misty eyed.

mm.

good job :)

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When something tastes good, your face has to show it.

...My face?
"You're a perfectly wounding artist."
:iconjdcc:
I really quite like the poetry here, it really is very good - there is true substance behind it - somthing you could really analyse. proffesional!


JC

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I am worth $2,010,054 on HumanForSale.com
:paranoid: they're all out to get me!

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